My OO

[tenniskid511]

Hi there-- this is my first ever OO-- and I know it definitely needs a lot of work, so I was wondering if anyone would be willing to offer input.

Err...am I allowed to post it here, though? If someone could let me know, I'll post it straight away ^_^

[prosergal]

I really don't know...but to keep everything somewhat private I would message anyone who is interested to help with your piece (it looks like this site allows you to message).

BTW, I am willing to read, proofread, and offer input. Send it my way. I'm an English major and theatre minor (and did speech for three years in HS) if that offers any incentive, haha!

[mollyolly0110]

Im willing to read it if you want, just send it as a private message or post it here :]