Late-season + Additional Category and Speech = Help?

[DCdisco]

Hey everyone....

I am planning on doubling at our Nat Quals.....in DI and OO. Unfortunately, I have not only never GIVEN an OO, I have never even SEEN one!!!

I've written up an OO based on a formation I've seen in some sample OO's.

I was just wondering if anyone would be so kind as to review it for me? Help me with revisions?

Thanks a ton! :D

[4N6ismyhomeboy]

This is my first year in OO but i went to CO state with mine. I'd be glad to help if you'd like. E-mail your speech to me at SKIBUM1608@aol.com and I'll look over it.

[HSTDeb8erGrl]

I'll be glad to help email me @ kfa3@pitt.edu

[Viet Moneys]

My oratory netted me fourth at Stanford, and I'm taking it to State and Nats, so if you're game for a second, er, third opinion, I'd be glad to help. Email me at (seperated to avoid spamming):

T i m T r a n s o n @ s b c g l o b a l . n e t

Good luck with your oratory. OO's really competitive this year, but that just means the rounds are more fun to watch!